Good approach, but poor editing

This books approach, teaching JS by programming games is effective, but the way the programs are layed out is confusing. In one chapter, the program is presented in parts, but it is VERY confusing how they go together, and parts of the program are left out entirely, which makes the program not work at all (Petals around the Rose, ch.6). An editor should be used who can correct programs, as well as correctling spelling.

Other Reviews

• More web less game
• Excellent teaching, but a bit outdated.
• Poor on example (relate only with games)
• Good approach, but poor editing
• Woohoo!!